Site crit please

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  • vespa0

    I like the clean simplicity of the site. But the typography isn't working very well.

    There are 4 different fonts in the first 4 cm. This seems unnecessary and contributes to a general sense of typographic unease about the site.

    The main body copy is set too wide - the optimum line length for onscreen text is 7-10 words before peoples' eyes have trouble following the line.

    The way the copy wraps around the photos looks messy. None of the photos are on any discernable grid structure. All gutters are inconsistent.

    nice cow tho.

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