site crit please
site crit please
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it does have a "clean and airy" vibe to it so far but it still needs some work.
The logo is cool, but maybe rethink that blue a bit because it's a little hard to read against the white. Same with the blue copy below it.
all and all it's a good start, just a bit minimalistic for my taste. I would work on a few small details and embellishments...not sure exactly what to tell you though. Maybe another little blurb of text so it's not just 1 chunk all the way across.
maybe make those photos below the copy fade in and out via a flash rotator or something. Just something to give it a little more life.