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- thismanslife0
I know what the main problem is. Everything's fighting for attention. Not enough contrast between the primary focus and the finer details - same goes for the photo imagery - pic in the box is bold and "significant" in what it shows, but the big type all around in general distracts, as do the big starfish / graduated beachy image.
Maybe try simplifying, making ONE image the main focus, like, really really amplify the focus on it, the leave space between the focal point in the image (the kiss) and the text. I'd be tempted to Photoshop more sea-blue out to the edges of the canvas and have all text below the main image "at the bottom of the ocean".
- I don't mean write the text "at the bottom of the ocean" I mean... as if it's below you, on the sea bed. Sort of. Maybe.thismanslife