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- thismanslife0
General concepts "alright", but too many different typefaces and sizes going on. Also, I don't like the picture being in a box with the beach pic graduating out. Not sure what to suggest on that front... but yeah, less typefaces / sizes... and, maybe better choice of type as suggested already, then play with the rest.