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  • gramme0

    honestly leftwave, it's not good. Looks like a postcard from Daytona Beach (Florida, where they drag-race on the beach). The font is very poorly designed. Fine if you want to depart from the traditional, buttoned-up look...but this is the most important day of your life, man. I think you can more subtly hint at your oceanic connection by the using of ink and paper colors.

    In my opinion, your wedding collateral should be a typographic masterpiece. If I could, I'd do mine all over again in a heartbeat. I'd make it more timeless. You want something that you will still like 30 years from now.

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