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  • rtr0

    couple questions/comments...
    Did he just start kissing you or were your heads above water and then you went under for the kiss and met there? Is he from the ocean?
    How did you meet exactly? there are so many fish in the sea he could have met but chose you etc... definitely emphasize the date more than other stuff i would have to agree with the other post

    • You mean a merman?Jaline
    • yeah is he a merman?rtr
    • hahahaha!
      lol J.
      ian

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