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This is not working well at all. The largest problem I see is a real lack of design. Meaning structure, heirarchy, aesthetic choices. Given the colors, size of type, large logo, and gray over busy dynamic background issue, as a user I don't know where to look. the composition is busy and cluttered, the type is heavy handed, the layout is busy with no white space (open space) to pause andallow the eye to rest. The menu, which should be at least second or third in the heirarchy is almost last.
don't mean to be harsh, but this is really poor. I think you need lots of work. Keep trying.
Luck