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Out of context: Reply #7

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  • mg330

    1,2,3:

    The placement of the leaves seems to throw it off, it just seems out of place and doesn't actually pass for a tree branch. Looks more like a bird's foot to me.

    4,5:

    The incomplete 0 - I looked up "zen symbols" and of course I see that it's a zen symbol, but, in the logo it just looks dirty. It doesn't at all make me think of pretty clothing for the demographic. It makes me think of dirty mechanics actually, like it's a big smudge of oil or grease.

    If you could copy this in some way, you'd have a great logo:

    My only advice is - don't take it so literally. Just because you're incorporate "Zen" doesn't mean you need the zen symbol. As for the tree branch thing, I don't get that at all.

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