DesignExperiment
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- mbr0
The plus sign - have it open up in the html/swf page so it is in the right window, it'd make in more connected to the site (but I like it).
I agree that project one did not keep my attention, but I am looking for immediate gratification when I look at sites from here.
#3 is interesting - what bothered me was that the rect.s overlapped by a pixel or two occasionally, seemingly without a reason. I'd either keep them intentionally apart, or try to bring your '+' back in (that's the choice I would go with), and you could use that to add another layer once and a while to the piece. Maybe coordinate the shapes with the music more. It could be very nice (it's still nice, though).
#3b - not sure. This is where it could be construed as 'trying too hard'. It's a fine line when you docuemnt the process in such a literal manner. If you threw some sketches in there, it could break it up. If it's about process, show us the whole thing.It's a good exercise, I think, to do this kind of work. It's always going to get criticism that forces you to rethink and work more, but that's kinda the point - to get better at the process next time around.
I've been hoping to have time to do this 'experimental stuff' for ages...have fun!