site crit please
site crit please
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- AndyRoss0
It's handsome. Looks like the sort of thing that people who exercise would like.
My beef is that I can hardly see the ampersand in white against the sky. It's so faint!
Maybe add some density to it, or a little color? Or leave it alone and tell me to drop dead?