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the work isn't bad for say a 4th quarter student .. though it is obvious your skill for refining is a little lacking (the rendering of the R in Recliner looks patched together .. sit with an illustrator tutorial book or take some classes)
the first piece in the list .. which means it must be your strongest .. doesn't make sense to me. why is orange juice yellow? i get the logo changes colors as you drink, but why? what do the colors signify? why is it done as an illustration and not as an actual bottle with the logo cut out in acetate to show your idea actually works? how is the meaning of dare worked out in this concept?
i would take the I Like poster out completely. the layout or subject matter aren't strong enough to constitute having it in your folio.
some little annoyances in your navigation tree - Work should be Work: as is Contact: below. as it is it looks like you forgot to make it a link. and your e-mail is typed incorrectly .. the [at] spacing is wrong. and to be frank .. i despise this format. it isn't functional. it's just trying to be clever. and it's not even your idea.
on the bright side! your paper alphabet book has some nice type .. though i don't appreciate the cheap xerox paper look of it.
you're off to the races though. just keep your head down and work hard for another year or two and be as hard on yourself as we are on you.