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Out of context: Reply #17

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  • oldelpaso0

    nah..

    theres something V. airline about it still.. (as in we do excursions to asian paradises)

    theres so much potential for the palette.. and u let it slide wih those colours.. :(

    there is something quite bizarre happening with the letter spacing ... maybe tighten them up slightly..

    little touches as well like putting the area code in brackets...

    'visual design' as an expression/profession is quite bizarre

    if ur dead set on doing with the swoosh - try making it fly off the E

    also have you tried putting the lower thing somewhere else?? like on top of eden east as opposed to infront? it seems to unbalance the composition.. its like a heavy weight at the end.. if you center it on top.. it might add a bit more stability..

    just a few pointers

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