bcd & ltrhd crit
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one thing not related to aesthetics that has bugged me out in the past...
when people make print letterheads and dont include their mailing address - its ok if u do everything by email and u invoice ppl with .pdfs etc. but if find it weird to recieve a letter with an email as the return address... just me/
ON AESTHETICS
the colour seems a bit random.. and not particularly appealing.no connection to the name in the typograpy/design/palette
the contact details seem to be lost in the right hand corner and not purposely placed there.. like u just didnt know where to put it . and chucked it in the corner...
another pet hate is doing serif fonts without any caps... unless for a logo or a title.
also ninja savant looks like its just tped and not actually a mark executed in the same typeface.. none of it is actually designed.. at the moment its just typed...
theres nothign there that would distinguish a pro from a amateur.. it looks like u typed it up and stuck a fat rectangle at the bottom and thats why it gets lost a bit.
hope the crit was somewhat constructive