Business card redesign
Business card redesign
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I like it but I think the type comes across as being not being refined enough for my liking.
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The leading is far to wide for what I would do.
The shape of the paragraph forms inside the card looks awkward too. I would look at perhaps shrinking it to make it sit better within the frame.
The leading suggestion above might help with this as well.
With the italcised elements for name, etc. I am not sure you need to underline them as well.
HTH