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couple of things:
1 - the thumbanil effect may look vv similar.. but i prefer yours to the 'original' (that pixel dot pattenr is a bit tacky) + your pallete is better
2 - level 1, 2, etc - unnecessry (the name of the section is enough)
3 the "visual deisgner" type looks a bit lopsided. :( because the gray over hangs "studios" a bit awkwardly + it looks like it not aligned ot the 'tight' grid u created. (maybe align it with "Visual"??)
4- the padding on the left of the grid is noticeably smaller than on the right (bring the left side in a bit more - maybe to the same x-position as the text in the client list?)
5 - the 'information' section looks a bit amateurish (as pointed out earlier) and slightly over prolonged. (although i think 'Design is Kinky" style questions are a no go too - writing in interview for yourself about yourself seems a bit too self obsessed.) (maybe not a few stats that ppl might like to know ie. Name, Education, DoB, Location, Skillset, etc)
6 - what did use for the visual plane? :p
hope it helps
feel free to ignore :)