Site Crit Please

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  • edd-e0

    iwlyfel-

    look att the other site crit in the PVN and notice the theme is a "surfer" and you see that theme as the background image helping solidify the sitess content.

    maybe instead of that bright orange as the background, use some images that relate to the fashion industry.

    perhaps use some fashion poses or something relating to the industry.

    the colours are not working that well and they dont help strengthen the sites content as a fashion site for a stylist, i dont see it yet...needs more work, and yes the fonts as well they need to represent the industry much better, when you think of fashion think of something flowing and moving something soft, not hard edged...

    you are on the right track but you need to flesh it out more...

    go purchase some fashion mags and just look at the first 40 pages of fashion ads...look at the fonts used and the colours...look at selling the site aas fashion is moving so faast so should the site.

    it should read FASHIONABLE!!!!

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