Site Crit Please
Site Crit Please
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- canuck0
I think the site's message doesn't really come across. For example what does Kristi want to get from having this site up.
Is she looking to get work as a stylist? Or just some general job in the fashion industry.
I think it's partly a problem more with the IA. Rather than the design.
Right now it doesnt really get the point across in my opinion. I don't really get a true understanding of her skills.
A section on her services would be more effective, with concrete examples, of her role on the project etc. And a clear piece of copy that explains what she is looking to do for her potential employer, customer.
blah just my 2 cents man. But othewise I don't mind the design.