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    Reminded me of some older Skwak-pieces. Very nice.

    I believe everything has probably been stated, so I'd just reiterate the fact I immediately look to the stars for some kind of deeper meaning slash actual constellation.

    Perhaps one prevalent to the time where the phrase was written, and location to be most visible to the naked eye or something at that particular time frame.

    Shrug, heh.

    Definitely add the period after "try" and make the "I'LL" all the same size.

    Very comfy looking.

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