Crit Meh
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couple notes on the text: I don't think the initial cap on the "i" in "i'll miss you" is helping- just make it all same size caps. Also, it's a little weird to have a comma after "kiss" but no period after "try".
Design is really nice, although I though the thing on the back was a volcano. Also, one thing that helps with stars is making some a lighter opacity- it adds depth.
almost there- good work jevad