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• rasko40

  having the strapline on the curve looks forced and is in no way benefitting the composition, I also feel the having 'The Solution' in bold is an idea that is trying too hard to little benefit. If the personal details are required to be seperate like that I suggest having them under the name, but at the bottom of the page, as for the address details etc I would have the address like so:

  60 Churchill Square
  Kings Hill
  West Malling
  Kent ME19 4YU

  Also, having the Tel: and Fax: on seperate lines seems inconsistent with mobile: and email

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