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the image is blurry and has ispokphoto written all over it.
the flower that breaks the border makes no sense and is overlyy sharpened against the blurry istock photo looks really weird.
the leaf patterns on the top and bottom which display the folliage in a diagonal pattern make my eyes bounce and doesnt give me and real sense of focal point.
the phone number whcih also is touching the leaf pattern on a diagonal is also to close to each other giving the eyes yet antoher un-comfortable bounce, try making a space between the bottom of the numbers and the top of the leaf pattern.
your font choice on the bottom and in the main area of verbage is very small and the edges are edgy...smooth it out by using a larger font size.
can you use more of the green negative space??
you are advertising a landscape designer correct?? but you are using the smallest amount of "LANDSCAPE" of the webpage you are building the site for.
maybe use more of that space to help strengthen the salability of the landscaper you are building the site for.
nice start...but you need to work on it more and flesh it out.