poster crit

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  • ETM0

    Is the border intentional and part of the poster, or is that just the way the image looks on your site?

    Something like that should bleed off the page to better activate the negative space. I would use a cleaner font and work on the kerning (I think already mentioned). The letters should be prefectly spaced and balanced with each other, which they are not. Typography is more than using the default font as is. See how the 'm' is closer to the 'e' than the 'p'? And how the 't' and 'y' touch?

    Trying putting the word off center to create more tension, straight centered is boring...

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