CV Crit v2
CV Crit v2
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- jamble0
I would definitely run it by a spell checker/proof reader and if you know anyone, a copy writer.
Some of the copy doesn't really read as well as it could.
1. 2006 - working on new business.
A director of a company doesn't "work on new business". They might "take an active role in new business development".
2. "aswell" in the Attik bit.
There's a few other bits where it comes across as a little mixed in direction, particularly the current role of director on the left contrasts with a more informal description of yourself on the right.
Definitely take a look at the copy / writing style a bit closer and either stick with a formal approach (I would do this) or a more informal one.