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  • Hewmiri0

    hello fellow Vancouverite.

    I rarely do the critiques but I thought I'd say a couple of things.

    1. the photo is a little blurry, maybe sharpen it a little.

    2. the grape looks too photo-realistic to be slapped on there like that. it doesn't fit. I say play with the hues/saturation and maybe find a better way to incorporate it with the layout. some vines maybe.

    3. the layout looks sort of "obesse". maybe separate the white content background from the nav? either literally or some texture/color changes.

    4. might wanna align the current specials arrow with the submit arrow above.

    good luck with the freelancing.

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