site crit... take 2

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  • madirish0

    and to piggy-back on jevad's crit there- the largest issue i feel is how so much of the text is evenly weighted across the layout. nav to header text to headlines to pull-quotes, etc. it is very hard to discern a content heirarchy as it is laid out now, or w/ nic's.

    also, the way you treat the 3 photos differently is distracting a bit to me. maybe pick one that works and paly w/ scale and size of the images rather than treating them all differnt? it might help reinforce your grid and thus the heirarchy.

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