site crit... take 2
site crit... take 2
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- k0na_an0k0
i'd make your secondary links 'more about us' and such a point or two smaller. make them the same size as the text in the boxes.
the page feels a bit clunky. take a look here....
http://www.egographies.com/
http://www.xynthetic.co.uk/
http://www.gate303.net/see how their shadows and gradients are nice and smooth, they flow very well. i know what you're trying to do with yours but it's not quite there yet, one more step to refine it and the page will be much softer.
i like the layout and you used the grid well.
keep pushing. it's almost there.