biz card crit v2

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  • pyeaton0

    Hi:

    Another chime going off for you.

    I like the leaf background idea, however, I would try to soften it. First, this is going to be a 4 color print job. Second, the leaf background, pulls away from the logo "branch" which is their identity. What I would do, (only a suggestion) is to vectorize the leaf, and assign it a PMS color. I would also use a cleaner font. The font is way cool, but not really what I would picture for homeopathic healing. Try a serif font in there. And last, but not least, I would stack all the information. Addy, phone, title and name. Keep a very simple and clean grid, which will in turn smooth the design for a homeopathic identity.

    Good luck.

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