logo crit please

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  • gramme0

    thanks.
    does anyone think there would be any legal entanglements because, as Raind0g pointed out, it looks similar to www.typevsm.com cubanita groove?
    ender79
    (Aug 30 06, 11:14)

    Legal issues or no, the concept & execution is too similar.

    The first two color pallettes are too feminine. Burgundy/brown/etc. is fine and even appropriate if you mix it up with at least one other softer color.

    When designing for a church I think staying power needs to be communicated in the logo, and I'm not quite sure you're there. What is this church's vibe? Looks like you're going for contemporary. What denomination?

    I'd explore the concept of grace a bit more, I think there's a rich conceptual vein that you've just barely touched...

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