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- Nairn0
All I see is the jumble of a font, which is one I don't particularily like, lost amongst the floral forms - I can't really read it, as it's not clear or distinct.
If you're going to stick with this font - you need to join up the s's properly and maybe try beef up the weight a little.
I also think the floral forms are a little scrappy too - doesn't 'feel' like there's any life or dynamism in there.
Sorry :(