quick crit
quick crit
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- _salisae_0
your font is okay .. the kerning is too tight and the stroke/drop shadow doesn't work
cheapens it .. as well as the inside drop shadow and the drop shadow on the silhouettes
some of the people look like they're floating .. bring their feet down to the base of the map/fan graphic
the silhouettes are very tired but they were overused so it's not your fault and maybe they work in this case .. but if you really want a nice piece i'd look for a different solution
the swirly part over the people is nice but i wish it tied in more with the graphic element on the bottom right somehow
you've got a lot of separate design elements ..they should be united somehow with a common graphic vernacular .. if that makes any sense to you