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Out of context: Reply #10
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- alpinist0
hey matt -
i really like where you're going with the navigation - it's more original than a lot of stuff i've seen recently. sorta reminds me of periscope at the get-go, but internally, it's enough outside of that to be legit.
simplification seems to be the theme of the day, so that's where i'm going to go...
- the tie-in of the green bg is conceptually interesting, but i interviewed you, and i don't recall the connection.
- the metaphors (etchasketch, printer...) are cool, but are feeling a bit heavy for some reason.
- look to the simplicity and logic of your original nav and figure out why that's working so well. applying that to the secondary areas will likely help toward achieving a nice balance of form and function
- flatten some color and other elements. you do nice work - let it speak for itself.
if i think of anything else, i'll just walk over to your desk and tell you...