Crit this for me plz
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- Bluejam0
The navigational area looks too busy. There seems to be overkill in the number of elements, crowding the space and thus, making it seem a little to confusing. You're using a washed out grey arrow on a similiar coloured background to highlight the on state of a menu item, it's not working...i'd introduce another colour...red perhaps? The right hand side menu items are getting lost on some of the images as well.
I'd drop the small pixelated white arrows and those red blocks, they're a stylistic element that makes no sense. Appropiate from the logo if you want to introduce some sort of shape, colour..etc.
The layout is working although i'd be tempted to revert to a left hand second menu system, keep it functional.
The imagery is good. I can see where you're going with the highway construction however a better shot might be needed, the one used looks more 'derelict'.
A good start and a little refinement and you'll be there.
Nice 1.