Logo crit
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i think it needs colour, for all the most vibrant exciting things thaat had occoured in my life i react a memory with an exciting colour so it stands out in my mind, kinda like using a label or highlight colour, its used t omake it pop...the colour choice you have used is more reminisicent of a faded memory something meant to be forgotten and lost, its in a shade or its colour looks sad, alone and depressed.
you need to make it shine as the description of what the company is offering.
look at a prism or a rainbow, chew some acid blotter and some mesculine...go to a planetarium and walk thru the flowers or a museum.
grab life!!! donnt lose life!!
a grey colour looks like the entropy of life which sounds liek a contradiction towhat you want to accomplish.