Poster crit
Poster crit
Out of context: Reply #8
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- johndiggity0
there's no sense of heirarchy, mainly the relationship between the type and image. contrast between the yellow and red, and the white and yellow, and the thin black lines on the white plate need to be reevaluated.
typograhically, the way the information has been presented doesn't seem to give any sense of what's important save for it's vertical placement on the page. the slant of the bottom 2 columns, as well as the addition of the website on a path are awkwardly handled and unrelated to the rest of the composition.
i'd rethink a lot of what's going on in this one.