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  • andsz0

    Do you have a rationale for the mark? i like abstract logos but this concept escapes me... Also look at graphic / type proportions... mark is too small in top right... not big enough in the one below... too even in the next one... this mark is kinda hard to work with... consider all caps / all small caps font treatments as you have upper lower going on now and it is kinda distracting... also - consider kerning and other font tweaks (look at how f runs into the u....) good luck!

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