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  • jox0

    Looking real sharp there, kyle.

    My only concern is the order --or lack of-- you display the work in. It doesn't make sense to me - you have a hard drive cooler ad and a Star Wars under the same headline. Perhaps make it more obvious what every piece is for?

    Everything is obviously for different audiences, don't think you should take anything away.

    Noyce jawb.

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