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- gruntt0
i haven't read any other responses but here is my analysis.
first, yes you're right, it's horrible.
from the top:
- chrome type... seriously?- ten thumbnailed photos too small for anyone to really see. 1 or 2 should be able to get the message across, it's an ad not a photo album. And those faded edges just add insult to injury.
- soundboard background, that could work if there weren't all the little ass photos all over it. it's a stack of busy on top of a red bed of busy.
- dual, random, b&w towers... what the fuck does that even mean? and again the faded edges thing.
- sound waves from the logo... again this could work but it's battling against the rest of the shit.
- chrome logo... seriously?
- body copy. 1st off please tell the dumbass that I know that his 9th grade typing teacher taught him "2 spaces after the period" but he lives in the future now and computers will adjust the space at the end of the sentence... 1 space.
- body copy continued... why the fuck would he wrap that last sentence below the photo?
- "It's time to be heard!" What? What? I can't hear anything because I've gone blind!
- the lines at the bottom coming out of the logo: these are supposed to be some high-tech mofos and dude puts a rabbit ear antenna on the ad???
dang.