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- Bluejam0
very 80s (which would suggest a very dated and out of tune company)
the focus of the piece is the imagery which while descriptive of what the company does, it does not say (visually) why this company is above or better than it's competitors. a good starting point would be to focus on the line 'it's time to be heard' which is a strong statement, and could be a good starting point for the piece. the bottom right text (services) also needs to be more prominent.
and last but not least, the visuals do not suggest anything to do with catering for christian events (if that's their market.