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- brundlefly0
So many first year Rules Broken
Too much info, plugged into the ad, makes it boring to read, if this is going into a magazine, you can expect the person seeing it, to not even bother to stop and read it, and just flip the page.
The feathering is annoying, but not as annoying ar the TEN photos representing sound equipment, we know what sound equipment is, we dont need the encyclopedia of sound images to re-explain it to us.
the chrome is dated, looks like a photoshop WOW book. Very me
Type is not justified, the "phenomenal" is porting over onto the other right side image, loses balance.
quote is (not judging the quality of the quote here thats a different matter) but it should stand out, looks like an after thought.
logo on bottom is off center...makes me nuts...throws off balance again.
everything main point is caps, except the "progressive sound engineering" tag, bad consistency.
top font is pinched...
4 fonts is two too many.
how am I doing?