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Out of context: Reply #3
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- airey0
just my point of view:
truly average.
the gradient trying to look metallic in the top text dates it about 6 years.
there's no tiered points of focus except maybe the CK Sound logo. everything else kinda fights for attention.
the text in the black flowing around the photos looks bad, especially the one line that wraps under the photo on the right?
maybe it would be stronger if the headline was just straight white and you tidied up the content text considerably.