Crit Me Pleez
Crit Me Pleez
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- Redmond0
Freakin nice! Don't change a thing. It's melancholic, it's got personality. Does Les like it? I think it looks pretty brave. People usualy like the plain jane stuff better. I envy you! The fade-away portion at the end is really cool. I love the whole montage thing. Great sensibility.
I only have a suggestion: the horizontal scroll is hard to see cause it's far from the whole center of interest section. Maybe put the whole frame at the bottom with the negative space thing on top?