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  • Mirefly0

    Nice beginning. I would do a little more research on what this research / medical study is. It seems like a mixture between psychology and physiology. If you have already. . . focus on the interesting aspects.

    Mix images that play on it.

    You have to admit, for example, playing with a mixture of a face , half expressing emotion and the other half showing biological construction of that face may be more interesting than showing a depressed person in a cliché pose. [you have to admit the pose is common]

    Your main layout is meticulous, well layed out, simplified and such but the imagery needs to reflect what is interesting about the research more.
    thanks for listening

    Mirefly
    : )

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