Crit my shizzle
Crit my shizzle
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- MrT0
Maybe it's just too light overall? Pastel colours and a very soft airy mark. This client has a very definite 'offer' and this just looks quite nice without saying much. What's the thinking behind it?
I don't think there's any problem with a yellow letterhead for overprinting, but the white and grey text will get lost in fax/photocopy.
Then again, how important is that nowadays? They're an IT company with a modern product - will they photocopy or fax anything or do it paper-free?
IMHO maybe it needs more oomph. To use the technical term...