Crit Me (II)
Crit Me (II)
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- davi-t0
Looks better.
No-go on the pink.
Body copy should be to the right instead of the left. Move the old dood to the right.
Make the guy appear outside of the boundaries..maybe his feet are outside of the gray bounds. give it some life.
Kill rounded edges. Make em sharp. This is corporate.
That aliased font looks like shat.
Paper airplane and gradient don't work.
Colors are kinda weird. think corporate.
Make a grid and follow that. shits all over the place.