Portfolio crit. client15.com

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  • davi-t0

    Your work is great. Site needs some help tho.
    Everytime I go to a different section, seems like it loads a new HTML page with Flash embedded...but most of the stuff on the page doesn't change....why not just put the nav and BG in one Flash file and navigate within one Flash file instead of seperate html pages...load content in as needed.
    Keep the Flash file left aligned to the html page instead of centered...goes with ur layout better.
    Kill those nav rollovers...they look amateur..but ur work is definitely not amateur. Add rollovers to subnav.
    Invert the colors of the next and prev buttons so they stand out more...I thought it was part of the background illustration and didn't notice that they were nav items at first.
    Kill the bubble clouds in the bg.
    Change "CUSTOMER" to "CLIENT" or "COMPANY"...customer sounds like I'm at a Best Buy checkout.
    davi-t

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