site crit please

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  • davi-t0

    like it. a lot. A few things:

    - your contact and CV download ROLLOVER should be the same width. Currently CONTACT rollover is a bit shorter on the left side.

    - When u get into one of your projects in the middle column: it's not so easy to find the next button, I'd make that stand out a bit more. Maybe make it that lime green color or something.

    - I'd kill the horizontal dashed line at the top of the page. It will make your design a lot cleaner and balanced. Plus its a bit antialiased.

    - White space is good if it serves a purpose aesthetically and functionally. Right now you have a ton of white space in the top left hand corner of the page: it doesn't serve a purpose and it doesn't make your page look any better. I'd put something up there to balance the page out. (Maybe your http logo, maybe another illustration.)

    - Not so crazy about the lowercase "f"'s used in that pixel font. Pretty hard to read.

    - When you click on a project, the fades from white could be a bit smoother. Personally, I'd take the fades out altohgether.

    - Some kind of audio or button sounds would be nice. Something really subtle though.

    - The section titles (info, project, and showcase) could be a bit larger in font size.

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