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Out of context: Reply #14

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  • Dancer0

    Yeah I like that. A few coments though (you know me ;)

    THe relationship between the mark and the type is off. The nark needs to be bigger. Perhaps do a variation with a bigger mark and the type is on 2 lines. This will help with readability as the N at the end of indian blends too much with INSPIRATIONand scaled down could look like one word.

    I still think you caould do a deboss on that mark making it look like a frank stamp.

    The shieldshape is still off for me.

    Good work though
    ;)

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