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  • piperboytoy0

    this is my personal opinion.

    I think it would be nicer and more simple if you have the boy girl characters going across the left box horizontally rather than on a slight diagonal. And also enlarge them so parts of them will go off the page.

    You should get rid of the shadow too, it looks to cluttered.

    I don't really like the colors, they don't look good.

    Also typography can use some work. I think it looks good otherwise.

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