site crit & suggestions

Out of context: Reply #11

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  • canuck0

    It has potential. I think that in the green block, a flash element would totally work, maybe some scrolling effect of the floral designs.

    I like how the section boxes
    look under the green box

    I do not however like the text
    grey combo you have underneath, seems a waste of
    space. Agian it doesnt jump
    out as a floral site right now,
    but if you worked some strong
    imagery into that green box
    then maybe. The white space to the left is bugging me what is that about?

    Anyway it seems to clinical to me. I'd try and get it more organic.

    shit, I forgot to double space.

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