Crit – moving card
Crit – moving card
Out of context: Reply #3
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- vespa0
none of the elements on the card have any visual relation to each other, except the coffee stain and the cardboard.
perhaps if you used that sort of treatment for some of the other elements it would hang together better. also the layout is quite weak, there's no visual rhythm or tension.